Thanks for sharing your new project. Here are a couple of pointers from me that I hope might help
Firstly, I like the hero on the homepage. It is the strongest part of the website, as is the menu.
I think, however, that the structure after that does not flow that well. You have the green banner Screenshot by Lightshot which I don’t think is needed as you have done an excellent job integrating the address and contact number into the header. Also, it looks like a footer.
I would use this significant space for one of two things:
- A signpost section named ‘our services’ with cards to the top-level pages of your main services ( Odontoiatria, Ortodonzia, Ortodonzia Linguale
- Or because dentists are very personable service (people worry/scared about dentists) Is to show an image of the primary dentition or dental team and a paragraph of a ‘mini about us’ (how we are friendly, serving the community for x amount of years, etc.) This will help give the website visitors confidence. You could then put number 1 below that, followed by the testimonials section, which builds trust.
I am not sure if you have been building the inner pages yet or just added the text content, but I would try to break this up into sections that are more enjoyable to read (nobody enjoys reading big blocks of text).
Anyways hope that helps